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Tuesday, 19 June 2018

This is a made up story I wrote in free writing.

Wild and Free dreamer
I was walking  through the peaceful sunny forest when suddenly I flew smack   bang right back into reality.  
When my alarm started to pound out I suddenly felt weary I think whoever invented school is stupid!!!!

I love lunch time because that's when I can go into the library hide under the bean bags  until the bell rings for The end of lunch time. That's when I can right back onto the dream Express in my little World of wonder. In my little world  of wonder I can do anything,But I love to visit the secret  village in the Woodlands.   “ Honey  are you ready the bus will be here in 5 minutes”    said mum.
NO!!!!!!!
 Now I’m bound to do something wrong and the mean girls at school just rub it in my face and make school so much worse  .
     
 5 minutes later
Ok I'm ready and I'm on the bus I’m pretty sure nothing went wrong  (I hope not).
6 hours later. Today school was absolutely horrible we had  a big science test  that I was so not ready for. But anyway who cares about school now,  I can jump right back onto my dream Express.  AHHHHH!!!
 I close my eyes but to my surprise nothing happened I opened my eyes and just lay there Wide eyed. Then I felt suddenly as if i was falling through a dark whole ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!                                The End

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