Today our Topic was Chocolate I learnt so much about how chocolate is made and where it comes from. My favorite activity was creating my own chocolate and box.
Hi keeva, I really enjoyed your work especially your story I like how you decribed how you felt eating chocolate. I also really liked you box the gold is really nice. Great job Abby
Hi Keeva Very high quality work you have done around chocolate today, I am super impressed. Your writing was very descriptive and I love the story line it kept me hooked all the way as I read it. Wow you made your own chocolate box and it looks amazing it has very high end feel to it I wonder how much you would charge for a box of that delicious diamond gem shaped chocolate? Keep up the awesome work.
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Hi keeva,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your work especially your story I like how you decribed how you felt eating chocolate. I also really liked you box the gold is really nice.
Great job
Abby
Hi Keeva
ReplyDeleteVery high quality work you have done around chocolate today, I am super impressed. Your writing was very descriptive and I love the story line it kept me hooked all the way as I read it. Wow you made your own chocolate box and it looks amazing it has very high end feel to it I wonder how much you would charge for a box of that delicious diamond gem shaped chocolate?
Keep up the awesome work.
Great chocolate story Keeva. I loved all the descriptive words you used to help me visualize what it was like for your dad to get you chocolate.
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