This week I really enjoyed learning further about where my food comes from. It has encouraged me and my family to grow more of our own produce. My favourite part was the persuasive writing and create tasks.
Wow Keeva exceptional work this week. I especially enjoyed reading your writing. I like how you used a specific quote in your persuasive writing as it added to your reasoning behind your point. I was super entertained by Fox's recipe for Rabbit soup! I love your little added in comments such as (Disclaimer: Don't burn your tail) , it had me laughing out loud! Well done! Miss Hudson
Hi Keeva, brilliant work this week. I really loved your procedural writing it was very creative and funny. Your vegetable penguin is great too it looks like you put a lot of effort in to it. Maybe next time you could try to do a few more creates. Amazing work . Abby
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Wow Keeva exceptional work this week. I especially enjoyed reading your writing.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used a specific quote in your persuasive writing as it added to your reasoning behind your point. I was super entertained by Fox's recipe for Rabbit soup! I love your little added in comments such as (Disclaimer: Don't burn your tail) , it had me laughing out loud!
Well done!
Miss Hudson
Hi Keeva, brilliant work this week. I really loved your procedural writing it was very creative and funny.
ReplyDeleteYour vegetable penguin is great too it looks like you put a lot of effort in to it.
Maybe next time you could try to do a few more creates.
Amazing work .
Abby