Purpose: to describe
When I watch Haka, I smell the power and strength. Hands are flying in perfect sync. Feet stomp at a steady drum beat. Eyes are bulging and voices are booming sending an echo through my ears. I feel the pounding in my chest like a herd of elephants. Fear and excitement swims laps through my body, as I watch eagerly. Trembling people surround me, staring continuously. I pull myself forward hoping to get a better view.
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